Friday, 10 February 2012

ALL - More feedback

We have edited another sample scene and got feedback on it from the class,

  • Remove all swearing
  • Get rid of shots done on the second camera because they contrast way too much with the quality of the main, first one
  • Consider reshooting, again, due to the location not being remote enough 
  • For the narrative, get rid of most of the dialogue in the introduction and focus on the mid shot of the cigarette being lit
  • Keep the shots of torches on the ground 
  • Delay the beginning of the song and the band playing and continue with the diegetic intro and the narrative

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